Task 3
Rewrite the following
paragraph by joining simple sentences into complex and compound ones:
Layan is a beautiful and
young girl. She wears a pink
shirt and black jeans. Everybody observes her. She recognizes that they are
observing her. She smiles diffidently. She holds the mike. She says two poems .
She writes these poems herself. Her supporters
are happy. They welcome her with a clap and cheer.
10 comments:
Layan is a beautiful and young girl,and She wears a pink shirt and black jeans. Everybody observes her,and She recognizes that ,so She smiles diffidently. She holds the mike,and She says two poems . She writes these poems herself. Her supporters are happy,so They welcome her with a clap and cheer.
Reem fannana
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Layan is a beautiful and young girl,and She wears a pink shirt and black jeans. Everybody observes her and She recognizes that they are observing her so that She smiles diffidently.She holds the mike, , She says two poems and She writes these poems by herself. Her supporters are very happy so They welcome her with a clap and cheer.
Huda Mohamed...
Layan is abeautiful and young girl ,and she wears apink shirt and black jeans.Everybody observes her and she recognizes that they are observing her so that she smiles diffidently.she holds the milke ,she says two poems and she writes these poems by herself.Her supportes are very happy so they welcome her with aclap and cheer .
Esraa Rajab
Layan is a beautiful and young girl and She wears a pink shirt and black jeans. Everybody observes her so She recognizes that they are observing her so She smiles diffidently. She holds the mike, and says two poems ,She writes these poems herself and Her supporters are happy,They welcome her with a clap and cheer.
haneen sadiq
Layan is a beautiful and young girl. She wears a pink shirt and black jeans so everybody observes her. She recognizes that they are observing her so she smiles diffidently. She holds the mike; in addition, she says two poems and writes these poems herself. Her supporters are happy. They welcome her with a clap and cheer.
Zenab
She wears a pink shirt and young girl black jeans. Everybody observes her,and She recognizes that ,so She smiles diffidently. She holds the mike,and She says two poems . She writes these poems herself.
Her supporters are happy,so They welcome her with a clap and cheer.
Layan is a beautiful young girl and She wears a pink shirt and black jeans. Everybody observes her and She recognizes that they are observing her and She smiles diffidently so She holds the mike and She says two poems . She writes these poems herself. Her supporters are happy soThey welcome her with a clap and cheer.
Layan is a beautiful and young girl and she wears a pink shirt and black jeans. Everybody observes her and she recognizes that they are observing her so that he smiles diffidently. She holds the mike and says two poems . She writes these poems herself. Her supporters are happy so they welcome her with a clap and cheer.
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